The Robbery
In this fun, amazing short film, Trey Seaba filmed the shot sequence of a fight scene. The first shot is the greatest fight shot. Trey shook the camera a little when the punch was aligned.
This was a fun experience because we took about 30-35 min of the remaining class period to take these shots. Trey edited the scenes and took in other clips to make sort of a story which I thought was really creative. I am the kid in the sweater.
Fighting Choreography
Jason, myself and Trey all helped and pitch in to make the choreography. There is one shot were it looks out of place but that is what we need to work on. I always loved fight scenes so Trey and I decided to make a quick one. Since the whole team was on the same page and had similar ideas we didn't have any disagreement.
The fight was very poorly done with the choreography and needed more practice with the actors. The added on essentials of the beginning really added a intense effect making the audience ponder what the storyline could possibly be. The very first punch that was delivered was very well done, it had a great camera jerk making it look like the fist had a great impact. The blogger was very well written but needs some grammar corrections, other than that this was a very well done blog post.
ReplyDeleteTo improve your fight videos, I think you should focus on using more intentional shots and lighting. There were a few instances where I could tell that no one was being hurt. When filming something like this, your goal is to make the audience feel something? Should they feel scared? Sorry for the person? Next time you're filming a fight scene, think about what you want the audience to feel and use that to guide your shots!
ReplyDeleteI like the explanation pertaining to the point of this video. But i however was not a fan of how you explained this as a short film rather than a little side project.
ReplyDeleteI love the meaning behind the video. It is very deep and touches the heart. I definitely became a better film student after watching this film.
ReplyDeleteI like the personal aspect you added to the post. Explaining your own personal point of view about a project is great. Try to go more into what the process to your video was. I like that you shared what you learned. Way to show off your new learned skills.
ReplyDeleteThis was a really well thought out blog post, and I was impressed with the clear interest you have in your article. The explanation behind the video was a great idea, and I'm glad we had the chance to understand your motivation for this video.
ReplyDeleteI think you should talk more about your role in the production process. You talk a lot about Trey's role in the project and what he did with his project, but I think you should focus more on how you helped him make the video. I think overall you did a nice job talking about the best parts of the film and the parts you need to improve on, nice job.
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